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SG-1: Asgard Rebirth Part 1 by =RyuuSentinel:iconRyuuSentinel:



Stargate SG-1: Asgard Rebirth

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A lone man walked down a large corridor, SGC painted on the left wall. He was in his mid twenties, with brown messy hair, sea blue eyes and a short chin goatee. Clad in a grey jumpsuit, the man walked quietly through the stone walled passage. Gripped tightly in his hand was a container, a handled silver cylinder. The light shined off of its smooth surface, keeping it’s content secret to any wandering eyes.

He stepped out of the passage, into the hallway outside a small elevator, leading to the surface. The man made his way towards the elevator, passing several solders in uniform heading in the other direction. It was SG-5, on their way to the Stargate. Before the last soldier past, the man nodded at him slightly, getting the same reply back a moment later. He reached the elevator, pressing a button to head up a second afterwards. The doors opened, revealing another person waiting holding a book.

“Good evening, Dr. Jackson” The man said with a small smile, before stepping into the elevator.

Daniel looked up at the man, remembering passing him only once before.

“…Hello” Daniel replied, returning his attention to his book.

The man glanced down at the book, before looking back at the door in front of him. A few moments passed silently, before the elevator doors slowly opened. A woman stepped into the elevator, smiling a little as the man walked passed her.

“Hey, Sam”. “Hi Daniel, you wanted to see me about something?” Carter replied, turning around with her back against the wall.

“Yeah, some of the relic’s that were brought back from P2R-49A have gone missing, I wanted to know if you had seen or moved them somewhere?” Daniel asked.

“No, I haven’t had the chance to yet, did you ask anyone else?” “Well, I asked SG-6 about it, but they haven’t seen them since they brought the relic’s back. I asked Teal’c about it, and suspected Vala had taken them for some reason, but I still couldn’t find them.” Daniel replied, while Sam watched the man walk out of sight, the elevator doors blocking the view.

“Daniel, who was that man?” Sam asked, grabbing Daniel’s attention.

“Hmm? I don’t know, I think he is one of the new personnel, why?” “I just felt…I don’t know, uneasy, like something was wrong...” Sam replied, crossing her arms, feeling a little uneasy.

Daniel looked back at her in thought, wondering what was wrong before his thoughts turned back to the theft. How someone could steal a newly acquired artefact, not long after it had arrived?

The elevator headed back down into the base, as the man made his way across the outside area of the mountain. He walked behind a large truck, before climbing into the back of it, unseen by any of the patrolling soldiers. A flash of white light escaped the back of the truck, a soft echo after that. A nearby soldier took notice, walking over to the back of the truck. He scratched his head, before heading away back to his patrols, after finding the truck completely empty. Below the surface, the SG-5 team stepped through the Stargate, the last soldier pausing a moment before following his team.
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This is the start of the Stargate FF series I am making, which will revolve around the Asgard. It is set months after the last episode of SG-1 and probably won't be as long as the others I am making.

I am going to try and make this series play out like an actuall episode of SG-1, or at least somewhat like that in style. I hope you enjoy it and that you like the Asgard as much as I do.
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Very good, but you spelled artifact wrong. Just thought I should point that out.

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My spell checker fooled me once again. I entered that and it said it was spelt wrong. Oh well, thank you for pointing that out. :)

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Sure thing. Machines are usually unreliable.

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It does seem that this is an episode of SG-1 I recognize the names, you did a great job! I sometimes watch stargate SG-1 and I like it, but I like stargate atlantis more (I don´t know why). Please refresh my memory, are the asgards the small grey aliens? if so then I like them too!

(I know you tagged me before and that I´m supposed to answer the questions and then tag my friends, but I have to get some things clear first, for example I don´t know how to put deviants avatars in the text and I have to find out how to do that)
Thank you. Yes they are and I don't really like Stargate Atlantis.

In answer to you question, you put whatever deviant's name inbetween the n and : of :icon: . Alright? Like this: :icondxball:

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Ok... I think I get it...thanks!
Your welcome.

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Seems like it's going to be a good story... I like it! :D

And I love the Asgard :heart:



A tip: When someone - let's just say his name's Daniel - has said something and someone - that we'll call Sam(!) - gives him an answer, it's easier for us readers if you put Sam's line on a new row... Otherwise it can be a bit confusing from time to time, even though you use quotation-marks.


Example:



This is how you wrote it:


“Hey, Sam”. “Hi Daniel, you wanted to see me about something?” Carter replied, turning around with her back against the wall.



To make it easier for the readers it's better if you write it like this:


“Hey, Sam”

“Hi Daniel, you wanted to see me about something?” Carter replied, turning around with her back against the wall.



I know it seems like a small thing, but it does help the readers...

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Ok and thanks.

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